The Earth in Motion

By Faizaan Hussain

When the earth is dark,

And the light sparks,

Though in vain, couldn’t make much.

It booms with thunder,

Followed by the pouring tears that hit the ground.

Yet, it cleanses the ground,

Which astounds the farmer,

By looking at the flourished crop satisfied.

8 Replies to “The Earth in Motion”

  1. Assalamualaikum Faizaan
    The poems are amazing.
    You are such a incredible kid and a source of joy for your parents and all of us.
    Really proud of you and your accomplishments.
    Keep up the good work

  2. SubhanAllah Faizaan! This poem is definitely my favorite out of the bunch. You did such a phenomenal job bringing attention to beautiful scenes in nature. I also really love how you use the word “tears” in this piece to describe the rain. May Allah (SWT) grant you many more opportunities to write thought provoking poetry and reward you for it. Ameen!

  3. Assalamualaikum!!
    Beautiful Faizaan:) MASHA ALLAH!! I really like this one.. Amazingly written.. It caught my attention at the title:-) Love ((hugs))


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